Wednesday, 17 August 2016

My Prompt

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It was a foggy night. I was at my friends house. At about 9:00 I said goodbye to go back home. My house was only a few houses away. It was getting colder and colder in every second. I could hardly see my way. Thanks to the street light for trying to shine the way. It was windy and it started to rain. I felt weird because there was no one around. It was extra quiet on the street.
As I was walking all the lights began to play up. They were going on and off very fast like they are racing each other. I started to walk faster and faster because I was getting scared but the faster I walked the more chasing the light did. I ran and ran. I pushed the door and jumped in the house. I told my brother what happened. He came out to check but nothing was seen. He said “Thank goodness you’re safe, you were not caught in the light chase.”

1 comment:

  1. Hi Courtney,
    I like the way you used good adjectives in your writing. I like the way you said "It was windy and it started to rain" I like that sentence because it sounds scary.
    I hope to see more improving in your writing.
    Keep up the Fantastic work.