It was a foggy night. I was at my friends house. At about 9:00 I said goodbye to go back home. My house was only a few houses away. It was getting colder and colder in every second. I could hardly see my way. Thanks to the street light for trying to shine the way. It was windy and it started to rain. I felt weird because there was no one around. It was extra quiet on the street.
As I was walking all the lights began to play up. They were going on and off very fast like they are racing each other. I started to walk faster and faster because I was getting scared but the faster I walked the more chasing the light did. I ran and ran. I pushed the door and jumped in the house. I told my brother what happened. He came out to check but nothing was seen. He said “Thank goodness you’re safe, you were not caught in the light chase.”
Hi Courtney,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used good adjectives in your writing. I like the way you said "It was windy and it started to rain" I like that sentence because it sounds scary.
I hope to see more improving in your writing.
Keep up the Fantastic work.
Malia